homework
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HOMEWORK: Can you talk about three things that scare you?
I\'m nothing scared of everything, But i believed that changing of people [이름]d.
I saw lots of these happened and also experienced that things.
For example, Originally my friend is good person and i like him very much.
But after someday, I felt strange about his acting and speaking attitude.
I don\'t know what made him strange but I\'m sure that Something made him weird.
It is not easy that changing people character and feature.
Someone did murder and gone to jail, after He came out the jail, few days after someone must be doing that again.
So, I feel some lesson that human-[이름]d is never change.
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I saw lots of these happened and also experienced that things.
But after someday, I felt strange about his acting and speaking attitude.
I don\'t know what made him strange but I\'m sure that Something made him weird.
It is not easy that changing people character and feature.
Someone did murder and gone to jail, after He came out the jail, few days after someone must be doing that again.
So, I feel some lesson that human-[이름]d is never change.
I\'m nothing scared of everything, But i believed that changing of people [이름]d.
>>I\'m not scared of everything, but I believe that the [이름]ds of people can change.
>>I\'ve seen this happen a lot of times and also experienced those things.
For example, Originally my friend is good person and i like him very much.
>>For example, originally my friend is a good person and I like him very much.
But after someday, I felt strange about his acting and speaking attitude.
>>But someday, I felt strange about his attitude and the way he speaks.
I don\'t know what made him strange but I\'m sure that Something made him weird.
>>I don\'t know what made him like that but I\'m sure that something made him weird.
It is not easy that changing people character and feature.
>>It is not easy to change a person\'s character and features.
Someone did murder and gone to jail, after He came out the jail, few days after someone must be doing that again.
>>Someone committed murder and gone to jail, after that he came out of jail, a few days after that, someone must be doing that again.
So, I feel some lesson that human-[이름]d is never change.
>>So, I learned the lesson that the human-[이름]d can never change.
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