homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today?
It is definitely technical skills.
>>> CORRECT
Every useful thing comes from technology.
>>> CORRECT
If there is a complete technical skill, we don\'t need to learn even foreign languages.
>>> CORRECT
In the opposite side, the development of technology causes very dangerous situations.
>>> CORRECT
For example, people will rely on systems too much.
>>> CORRECT
Thus, people don\'t need to remember or create.
>>> CORRECT
The balance is the most important between development and usage.
>>> CORRECT
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