homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-What have you been procrastinating lately and why?- (^-^)
Thesedays, I do not home work everyday.
When I started learning English at PW, I did my homework everday and listened the feedback recording.
Doing homework everyday was a little stress and burden to me becaue I had to make time at least an hour.
I had to check every word not to misspell and find proper word. It took many times to me.
But I decide not to force me to do perfact composition. That \'s why I misspelled.
From that itme, I feel free when I do homework and I can enjoy the conversation with my teacher.
I just focus on the conversation now and check the perfact sentense which teacher makes correct.
Sometimes, We need to procastinate somthing not to get stress.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for this homework. I appreciate your effort! ^ ^
Yes Ms. [이름], you don\'t have to worry about your homework a lot. You can do it at your most convenient time and when you feel like doing it. No worries, no pressures. ^ ^ As with your grammar and misspelled words; that\'s what I\'m here for! ^ ^ To correct and help you improve more! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
Thesedays, I do not home work everyday.
>>These days, I have not been doing my homework everyday.
When I started learning English at PW, I did my homework everday and listened the feedback recording.
When I started learning English at PW, I did my homework everday and listened the feedback recording.
>>When I started learning English at PW, I did my homework everyday and listened to the feedback recording.
Doing homework everyday was a little stress and burden to me becaue I had to make time at least an hour.
Doing homework everyday was a little stress and burden to me becaue I had to make time at least an hour.
>>Doing homework everyday has become a little stressful and a burden to me because I had to make time for at least an hour.
I had to check every word not to misspell and find proper word.
I had to check every word not to misspell and find proper word.
>>I had to find the correct/appropriate word and check if I hadn\'t misspelled them.
It took many times to me.
>>It takes a long time for me.
But I decide not to force me to do perfact composition.
>>But, I decided that I can\'t force myself to make the perfect composition.
That \'s why I misspelled.
>>CORRECT
From that itme, I feel free when I do homework and I can enjoy the conversation with my teacher.
From that itme, I feel free when I do homework and I can enjoy the conversation with my teacher.
>>From then on, I felt free when I do my homework and I can enjoy the conversation with my teacher.
I just focus on the conversation now and check the perfact sentense which teacher makes correct.
I just focus on the conversation now and check the perfact sentense which teacher makes correct.
>>I just focus with the conversation during the class and check teacher\'s corrections with my composition.
Sometimes, We need to procastinate somthing not to get stress.
Sometimes, We need to procastinate somthing not to get stress.
>>Sometimes, we need to procrastinate certain things in order not to get stressed.
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