homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-If your body could talk, what would it tell you?- (^-^)
First of all, I really thank my body for keeping healthy until now.
My body will talk to me that it is very tired everday.
When I drink and go to bed late, I can hear that my body want to take a rest.
I know that I have to stop drinking, smoking and hard exercise.
But I have ignored my body condition and have done what I wanted to do.
I feel very sorry to my body.
But I have been doing good thing for my body such like below.
Swimming, streching, playing golf, lower body bathing
Eating healthy food and takingsupplements everyday.
I am sure that my body likes those things.
Well, I will more care for my body!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. ^ ^ I really appreciate it.
It is good to know that despite doing some vices, you still see to it that you do something good for your body. It will surely thank you in the future! ^ ^ Keep it up. We must continue taking care and loving our bodies! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
First of all, I really thank my body for keeping healthy until now.
>>First of all, I\'m thankful that my body is still healthy now.
My body will talk to me that it is very tired everday.
My body will talk to me that it is very tired everday.
>>Probably, my body will say that she\'s tired.
When I drink and go to bed late, I can hear that my body want to take a rest.
When I drink and go to bed late, I can hear that my body want to take a rest.
>>When I drink and go to bed late, I can feel that my body wants to take a rest.
I know that I have to stop drinking, smoking and hard exercise.
I know that I have to stop drinking, smoking and hard exercise.
>>I know that I have to stop drinking, smoking and doing hard exercises.
But I have ignored my body condition and have done what I wanted to do.
But I have ignored my body condition and have done what I wanted to do.
>>CORRECT
I feel very sorry to my body.
I feel very sorry to my body.
>>I feel very sorry for my body.
But I have been doing good thing for my body such like below.
But I have been doing good thing for my body such like below.
>>But I have been doing good things to my body such as:
Swimming, streching, playing golf, lower body bathing
Swimming, streching, playing golf, lower body bathing
>>CORRECT (misspelled \"stretching\")
Eating healthy food and taking supplements everyday.
Eating healthy food and taking supplements everyday.
>>CORRECT
I am sure that my body likes those things.
I am sure that my body likes those things.
>>CORRECT
Well, I will more care for my body!
Well, I will more care for my body!
>>Well, I will care for my body more!
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