homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-Where would you rather go for a vacation; to the mountains or to the beach? (^-^)
I will say that I am going to go the beach.
As you know, I like swimming so I will swim all day at the beach and lying on the sand wathcing the beautiful view.
I am a little bit scared going to the mountians because of insects, animals and sankes.
when I imagine that I stay at the mountains alon. I get goose bumps all my body.
I know that there are also scary fishes and sea snakes in the sea.
But If I have to choose one of that, I will go to summer beach.
Ah~~ Suddenly, I want to pack may bag and leave here to the beach right away!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for this homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
I think we have the same thought about these. Even though I don\'t know how to swim, I would prefer to enjoy and spend my time at the beach. We can enjoy the lovely views, the waves and just being there makes me really feel good! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I will say that I am going to go the beach.
>>CORRECT
As you know, I like swimming so I will swim all day at the beach and lying on the sand wathcing the beautiful view.
As you know, I like swimming so I will swim all day at the beach and lying on the sand wathcing the beautiful view.
>>As you know, I like swimming so I will swim all day at the beach and lay on the sand while watching the beautiful view.
I am a little bit scared going to the mountians because of insects, animals and sankes.
I am a little bit scared going to the mountians because of insects, animals and sankes.
>>CORRECT (misspelled \"mountains\", and \"snakes\")
when I imagine that I stay at the mountains alon.
when I imagine that I stay at the mountains alon.
>>When I imagine that I stay in the mountains alone.
I get goose bumps all my body.
>>I get goose bumps all over my body.
I know that there are also scary fishes and sea snakes in the sea.
I know that there are also scary fishes and sea snakes in the sea.
>>CORRECT
But If I have to choose one of that, I will go to summer beach.
But If I have to choose one of that, I will go to summer beach.
>>But If I have to choose one of that, I will go to the beach.
Ah~~ Suddenly, I want to pack may bag and leave here to the beach right away!
Ah~~ Suddenly, I want to pack may bag and leave here to the beach right away!
>>Ah~~ Suddenly, I want to pack may bag and leave for the beach right away!
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