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2019-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Jedah! Today I did a funny things. One of my friend gave me a box of red Ginseng jam last week for a present. I did not know What he does. I took the Ginseng jam and I found it was good. so I asked him How I can buy that for the Chusuck presents. He suggested good price almost whole seller price so, I bought 10 box and promote to my friends. And suddenly today, some of my friednds send to tax that they want to buy also for the presents. I becam a Ginseng seller today. hihi I ordered 30 boxes.(Surprise?) He was very thankful to me and I am also happy to help him.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Wow! It was unintentional but you became an instant \"Ginseng\" seller! ^ ^ You are one funny woman! ^ ^ I wish I\'m there, so I could also try that. I bet it\'s really good. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

Today I did a funny things.

>>Today, I did a funny thing.
One of my friend gave me a box of red Ginseng jam last week for a present.

>>CORRECT
I did not know What he does.

>>I don\'t know what he does.
I took the Ginseng jam and I found it was good.

>>CORRECT

so I asked him How I can buy that for the Chusuck presents.

>>So I asked him where can I buy them to give as presents on Chuseok.
He suggested good price almost whole seller price so, I bought 10 box and promote to my friends.

>>He gave me a very good price much like a wholesaler price, so I bought 10 boxes and promoted it to my friends.
And suddenly today, some of my friednds send to tax that they want to buy also for the presents.

>>And suddenly, today, some of my friends texted me and wanted to buy them to give as presents too.
I became a Ginseng seller today. hihi

>>CORRECT
I ordered 30 boxes.(Surprise?)

>>CORRECT
He was very thankful to me and I am also happy to help him.

>>CORRECT

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