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What are the good and bad points of using computers?
The advantage of computers is that they can easily and quickly get a lot of information, while the disadvantage is that they can quickly and easily access harmful information.
But there are more advantages. You can easily reach out to your friends far away and watch the movies and TV you want to watch. If you keep away from the bad and take advantage of the good things, the computer will help you a lot in our life.
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Good morning Cecelia! Thanks for answering the question. Your sentences are correct and understandable so I don\'t need to correct them.
See you later. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
The advantage of computers is that they can easily and quickly get a lot of information, while the disadvantage is that they can quickly and easily access harmful information.
But there are more advantages. You can easily reach out to your friends far away and watch the movies and TV you want to watch. If you keep away from the bad and take advantage of the good things, the computer will help you a lot in our life. >> CORRECT
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