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2019-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I want to live the main street in the city. Because the main street has many facilities such as stores, transportations and sport centers. I love to go marts to buy some groceries when I go back to home. Even if I hardly cook the dishes in the house, I regularly go to market. So, the market must be located near my house. And other important element is that whether I could take the public transportation within 10 minute by walk or not. I don’t have my own car, so I always take the bus or subway when I move to somewhere. If I choose the location to live, I prefer whether the house located near the main street and easy to take transportation. If possible, it will be good that the park is located near my house. I live the house near the botanical park now, so I can go to the park anytime whenever I want to walk or take a break in nature, enjoying beautiful sceneries. That’s a great point that I satisfied with my house.

강사 첨삭

Hello Luna! Thank you for this. I understand your point, and I do want to live in a convenient place as well. Commuting to work is also a struggle for me. I wish I could live where I just wake up, get dressed and walk to work in less than 5 minutes. Life would be perfect.
- T. Beth
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I want to live the main street in the city. 
>>>> I want to live on the main street in the city.    
Because the main street has many facilities such as stores, transportation and sport centers. 
>>>> Correct
I love t
o go marts to buy some groceries when I go back to home. 
>>>I love to go to marts to buy some groceries when I go back to home.    
Even if I hardly cook the dishes in the house, I regularly go to market. 
>>>>  Even if I hardly cook the dishes in the house, I regularly go to the market.   
So, the market must be located near my house.
>>>> Correct 
And other important element is that whether I could take the public transportation within 10 minute by walk or not. 
>>>> Correct    
I don’t have my own car, so I always take the bus or subway when I move to somewhere. 
>>>> Correct    
If I choose the location to live, I prefer whether the house located near the main street and easy to take transportation. 
>>>> If I choose the location to live, I prefer a house located near the main street and easy to take transportation.    
If possible, it will be good that the park is located near my house. 
>>>> Correct    
I live the house near the botanical park now, so I can go to the park anytime whenever I want to walk or take a break in nature, enjoying beautiful sceneries. 
>>>> I live in a house near the botanical park now, so I can go to the park anytime whenever I want to walk or take a break in nature, enjoying beautiful sceneries.    
That’s a great point that I satisfied with my house.
>>>That’s a great point that I am satisfied with my house.    

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