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How do you keep in touch with your distant friends?
When I was young, I sent my greetings by letter. But now most people including me keep in touch using the smartphone and text with their distant friends.
I think, smartphone is convenient, but it is not affectionate as much as letter. Before I didn\'t get married yet, my husband and me exchanged letters each other. I have them until now. I think letter gives me happy and momory.
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Hello Bella ,
Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Keep up the good work!
*I do agree that letters are more affectionate than text messages. :)
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
How do you keep in touch with your distant friends?
When I was young, I sent my greetings by letter.
When I was young, I sent my greetings by letter.
>>>CORRECT
But now most people including me keep in touch using the smartphone and text with their distant friends.
>>>But now, most people including me keeps in touch using their smartphone by texting their distant friends.
I think, smartphone is convenient, but it is not affectionate as much as letter.
>>>I think smartphone is convenient, but it is not as affectionate as letters do.
Before I didn\'t get married yet, my husband and me exchanged letters each other.
>>>When my husband and I were not yet married, we used to exchange letters to each other.
I have them until now. I think letter gives me happy and momory.
>>>I have the letters until now. These letters gives me happiness and good memories.
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