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2019-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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HOMEWORK: If you were going to marry someone, but had a family secret they should know before you get married would you tell them? I must be tell the whole story about my wife. Because, We met each other by love and good emotion. So, It is true that telling the story to my family but If they don\'t like married between us, I should persuade my family. It is noting which forever secret in the world. Someday secret raising to surface. Reason for that why they decided to married is that they are passing the dating time and sure to proposing each other. In 10 years, Someday I will married, I hope to meet female who really like me and can sharing our information.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

I must be tell the whole story about my wife.

>>I must be the one to tell the whole story about my wife.

Because, We met each other by love and good emotion.

>>Because, we fell in love with each other and we have the same emotions.

So, It is true that telling the story to my family but If they don\'t like married between us, I should persuade my family.

>>So, it is true that telling the story to my family, but if they don\'t like our marriage, I should persuade my family.

It is noting which forever secret in the world. Someday secret raising to surface.

>>There is no secret that can be kept forever. Someday the secret will surface.

Reason for that why they decided to married is that they are passing the dating time and sure to proposing each other.

In 10 years, Someday I will married, I hope to meet female who really like me and can sharing our information.

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