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2019-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

학생이 쓴 원문

Do you ever find it difficult to say how you\'re feeling in English? ya, sometimes It isn\'t easy to me. well..there are several situation. so I am about to write it down here. first, when I just get up but I will have to speak English with someone, it was difficult to express my feeling clearly. second, while doing English interview or giving a presentation in front of many people, It was hard to speak English fluently Although I practiced a lot, I think this experience might help me realize something new, so after that, I have been using speak English new people. hello teacher :D Finally I did homework lol, I think I am going to try to do homework quickly after class . hehe see you soon!

강사 첨삭

This is an amazing surprise Ms. [이름]nie^^
Thank you very much for your effort, I really appreciate it.
Talk to you later then :)


Writing Task: Do you ever find it difficult to say how you\'re feeling in English?


ya, sometimes It isn\'t easy to me.
>>Yes, sometimes it\'s not easy.
well..there are several situation. so I am about to write it down here.
>>Well, there are several situations, so I\'m going to write it down here.
 first, when I just get up but I will have to speak English with someone, it was difficult to express my feeling clearly.
>>First of all, when I just woke up and had to talk to someone in English, it was hard to express my feelings clearly.
second, while doing English interview or giving a presentation in front of many people,
>>Second, during English interviews or presentations in front of many people,
It was hard to speak English fluently
>>CORRECT!
Although I practiced a lot, I think this experience might help me realize something new, so after that, I have been using speak English new people.
>>I practiced a lot, but I thought this experience would help me realize something new, so I\'ve been learning from different people.


hello teacher :D

>>Hello teacher!
Finally I did homework lol, I think I am going to try to do homework quickly after class.
>>Finally, I did homework lol, I think I am going to try to do homework quickly after class.
OR:  I finally did my homework. lol, I will do my homework quickly after class.
hehe

>>CORRECT!
see you soon!

>>See you soon!


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