homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Lucy
I have never thought of myself as a bargain hunter.
>>CORRECT!
>>I haven\'t tried being a bargain hunter.
I am an idle person who would rather buy something on that place even if it is a bit more expensive.
>>CORRECT!
>>I wouldn\'t hesitate to buy something even it\'s expensive.
However, I get excited when I find what I want on discount.
>>However, I get excited when I find out I want is on discount.
I don\'t look around for discounts, but who wouldn\'t love cheaper price?
>>CORRECT!
>>I don\'t look for discounts, however everybody prefers the cheaper one.
The best sales day in our country is probably the new year\'s day.
>>CORRECT!
>>New Year\'s Day is the biggest holiday on sale.
Many people visit their family, and while doing it, they buy presents.
>>CORRECT!
>>People buy presents when they visit their family.
Markets discount almost everything.
>>Markets give discount to almost everything.
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