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2019-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

-What qualities of your husband attracted you most?- (^-^) I wa sure that he loves me more than he loves himself. He still loves me and cares me as I feel. He is a quiet person but he has sens of humors and wits. He is not intellectual but he is smart. He is not very deligent but he is not lazy. He is not tall but he is taller than me. He is not a good cook but he likes my cooking although it is not delicious. He is not a good singer but he likes singing with me at the Karaoke. He is not a heavy drinker but he likes drinking with me all night. Wow! I think I love him so much !!! hihihi

강사 첨삭

Wow [이름]! You really have a way of making me smile! ^ ^ I wonder how your husband would feel if he gets the chance to read this. It\'s like you have written a poem for him and any reader would definitely feel the love you both have for each other! Good for you! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I wa sure that he loves me more than he loves himself.

>>I am sure that he loves me more than he loves himself.
He still loves me and cares me as I feel.

>>I really do feel that he loves and cares for me.
He is a quiet person but he has sens of humors and wits.

>>He is a quiet person but he has a sense of humor and wits.
He is not intellectual but he is smart.

>>CORRECT
He is not very deligent but he is not lazy.

>>CORRECT (misspelled \"diligent\")
He is not tall but he is taller than me.

>>CORRECT
He is not a good cook but he likes my cooking although it is not delicious.

>>CORRECT
He is not a good singer but he likes singing with me at the Karaoke.

>>CORRECT
He is not a heavy drinker but he likes drinking with me all night.

>>CORRECT
Wow! I think I love him so much !!! hihihi

>>CORRECT

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