homework
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[ESSAY]
In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> >> “Time is money.” Do you agree or disagree? Why?
I totally agree with that sentence and I think that time equals definitely money. Some people say that the rich buy poor\'s time and this is what salary\'s meaning. In my case, I spend my times at our company at least 40 hours a week, and I get paid from the company. From this, I can say time can be calculated to money and which is why time is money.
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[ESSAY]
In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> >> “Time is money.” Do you agree or disagree? Why?
I totally agree with that sentence and I think that time equals definitely money.
>>>> I totally agree with that sentence and I think that time definitely equals money.
Some people say that the rich buy poor\'s time and this is what salary\'s meaning.
>>>> Some people say that the rich buy the poor\'s time and this is the meaning of salary.
In my case, I spend my times at our company at least 40 hours a week, and I get paid from the company.
>>>> In my case, I spend at least 40 hours a week at my company, and I get paid for it.
From this, I can say time can be calculated to money and which is why time is money.
>>>> correct
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