homework
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HOMEWORK: Which hobbies are the most popular with women in your country?
First, I think that women usually going to cafe in there free time.
It can be also sharing their information and can heard their lives.
I like to going cafe. because it had a lots of deserts and teas.
Second, It is bad[이름]ton, when i prepared the match in our city, I saw many women for match.
And usually learned in school with physics subject.
Because, It is very simple to learned, and it is proper to helping their healthy.
whoever can be started very easy.
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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
>>First, I think that the women who usually goes to the cafe are there if they have free time.
It can be also sharing their information and can heard their lives.
>>They share different kinds of information about their lives.
I like to going cafe. because it had a lots of deserts and teas.
>>I like to going the cafe. Because it has a lot of deserts and teas.
Second, It is bad[이름]ton, when i prepared the match in our city, I saw many women for match.
>>Second, it is bad[이름]ton, when I prepared for a match in our city, I saw many women in the match.
And usually learned in school with physics subject.
>>And they usually learn physics in school.
Because, It is very simple to learned, and it is proper to helping their healthy.
>>Because, it is very simple to learn, and it can also improve their health.
whoever can be started very easy.
>>Whoever starts first can have an easy life.
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