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How do you do healthy aging?
Everybody knows there is truth in commoness.
Healthy aging comes from a good meal , a good sleep and a good excrement.
The other words, we should live a regular life for a healthy aging.
And we have to think positively, excercise steadily. Then we\'ll end up beautiful and healthy aging.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bella,
Happy Wednesday!
Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
How do you do healthy aging?
Everybody knows there is truth in commoness.
Everybody knows there is truth in commoness.
>>>Everybody knows there is truth in commonness.
Healthy aging comes from a good meal , a good sleep and a good excrement.
>>>Healthy aging is eating nutritious foods, a good sleep and an exercise.
The other words, we should live a regular life for a healthy aging.
>>>In other words, we should live a regular but a healthy lifestyle for a healthy aging.
And we have to think positively, excercise steadily.
>>>We have to think positively and exercise continuously.
Then we\'ll end up beautiful and healthy aging.
>>>Then, we\'ll end up beautiful and will age healthily.
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