Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could be an animal, I chose a birds.
Because they have wings and they can fly anywhere.
I want to fly with my wings.
They also breath clear air in the sky.
Birds are diligent. Birds get up early and move diligently.
Most of all, they are beautiful.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ellen! Thank you for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Thank you for your thoughts here. I think we have the same desire. I also want to be a bird, an eagle to be exact. Eagles are large powerful birds with great eyesight! And they actually travel/fly alone! They don\'t need to rely on anyone but themselves! Awesome birds right? ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
If I could be an animal, I chose a birds.
>>If I could be an animal, I would choose to be bird.
Because they have wings and they can fly anywhere.
Because they have wings and they can fly anywhere.
>>CORRECT
I want to fly with my wings.
I want to fly with my wings.
>>CORRECT
They also breath clear air in the sky.
They also breath clear air in the sky.
>>CORRECT
Birds are diligent.
Birds are diligent.
>>CORRECT
Birds get up early and move diligently.
>>CORRECT
Most of all, they are beautiful.
Most of all, they are beautiful.
>>CORRECT
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