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HOMEWORK: Why do people say laughter is the best medicine?
Laughing is cure of mental stress and physical stress.
It can be also decreased from over nervous.
For example, a man who have a disease that it caused hard bones and muscles.
And, some experts let him to watching a comedy show.
After that, he realized that his pain is getting decreased.
We can find lots of these information around us, If my friend look sad or tired, I can making him happy by some funny story or talking.
Laughing therapy would be utilized that decrease of pain for patient or stress-management of people.
How about laughing in your free time just a little bit?
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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
Laughing is cure of mental stress and physical stress.
>>Laughing is the cure for mental stress and physical stress.
>>It can also decrease nervousness.
For example, a man who have a disease that it caused hard bones and muscles.
>>For example, a man who has a disease that caused his bones and muscles to harden.
And, some experts let him to watching a comedy show.
>>And, experts let him watch a comedy show.
After that, he realized that his pain is getting decreased.
>>After that, he realized that his pain is decreasing.
We can find lots of these information around us, If my friend look sad or tired, I can making him happy by some funny story or talking.
>>We can find lots of these information around us, if my friend looks sad or tired, I can make him happy by telling him a funny story.
Laughing therapy would be utilized that decrease of pain for patient or stress-management of people.
>>Laughing therapy should be utilized to decrease the pain of the patient or stress-management of people.
How about laughing in your free time just a little bit?
>>CORRECT
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