homework

2019-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

-Write ten things that you really like about yourself.- (^-^) 1. I like my appreace I am tall and skinny^^ 2. I like my attitude when I meet other people I am kind and open minded. 3. I like the way I talk. Many people like my speech. 4. I like my wits. 5. I like my mind. I am very delicat and I am very positive. 6. I like my sincierity. I still write diary everyday. 7. I like my fashion style. 8. I like my good habits Recycling for earth,saving resources. 9. I like my generocity I like giving presents to others. 10. Ilke my eating habits. Wow, I think I love me so much !!!

강사 첨삭

That\'s right! You see! I bet this list will go on and on because we really have to start recognizing the good things about ourselves. It makes us like \"us\" better! Feels good right? ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

1. I like my appreace

>>CORRECT (\"appearance\")
I am tall and skinny^^

>>CORRECT
2. I like my attitude when I meet other people
I am kind and open minded.

>>CORRECT
3. I like the way I talk.
Many people like my speech.

>>Many people like the way I talk.
4. I like my wits.

>>CORRECT
5. I like my mind.

>>I like my thoughts.
I am very delicat and I am very positive.

>>CORRECT (\"delicate\")
6. I like my sincierity.

>>CORRECT (\"sincerity\")
I still write diary everyday.

>>I still write on my diary everyday.
7. I like my fashion style.

>>CORRECT
8. I like my good habits
Recycling for earth,saving resources.

>>CORRECT
9. I like my generocity

>>CORRECT (:generosity\")
I like giving presents to others.

>>CORRECT
10. I like my eating habits.
Wow, I think I love me so much !!!

>>CORRECT

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