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Do you think lifting weights can be beneficial for you?
Of course, yes.
I think, as a person gets older, he/she needs to get more muscles, especially lower body muscles.
The reason why I usually do not only lifting weights using my hands but also lifting weights using my feet after running on the treadmill.
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Do you think lifting weights can be beneficial for you?
Of course, yes.
I think, as a person gets older, he/she needs to get more muscles, especially lower body muscles.
Of course, yes.
I think, as a person gets older, he/she needs to get more muscles, especially lower body muscles.
>>>Of course yes, I think as a person gets old, he or she needs to get more muscles especially on his or her lower body. Another reason is that they will need a stronger legs as they get old.
The reason why I usually do not only lifting weights using my hands but also lifting weights using my feet after running on the treadmill.
>>>I wanted to have a healthy body with strong muscles that is the reason why I don\'t only lift weights using my hands but also with my feet. I usually do it after running in the treadmill.
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