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How do you think face to face communication differs from communication using computers?
The face to face communication distinctly differs from communication using computer.
Because face to face communication feelings voice-tone or facial expression and emotional things better than using computer.
The face to face communication can to read people\'s feelings well.
So, the communication using computer can to miss small and important things.
That can to misunderstand.
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The face to face communication distinctly differs from communication using computer.>> Correct
Because face to face communication feelings voice-tone or facial expression and emotional things better than using computer.
>> This is because face to face communication conveys feelings through the tone of voice or facial expression better than using a computer.
The face to face communication can to read people\'s feelings well.
>> People can read the feelings of others well through face to face communication.
So, the communication using computer can to miss small and important things.
>> Communication using a computer can make us miss small but important things.
That can to misunderstand.
>> This can cause misunderstanding.
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