homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-What is something that will happen in the future that you are looking forward to?- (^-^)
I really expect to have a AI a house maid robot, a private driver robot and funny friend robot.
I like the movie \'A.I.\' In the movie there was a little boy robot who was adopted to a normal human family intead of their sick human boy.
He was a happy and got love from human parents. but one day, the human boy recovered and came back home. the boy robot tyried to get love his parents but his parents cared more their human boy and loved him more than the boy robot. At the end, the robot boy sinked in the deep water waiting for his mother for a 1000 years. and he was founded by aliens in the destryoed earth. When he waked up, he asked aliens for his mother back to him. do you want to know more? I will talk to you at the class.
Anyway, I want to have my robots in the future before I die.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for trying to catch up with your homework. I really appreciate the effort! ^^
Thank you for sharing about this movie. You know what, this movie has been shown probably a hundred times on my cable TV but I never got the chance to watch it. Maybe only a few parts of the movie but never got the chance to watch from beginning to end! ^^ Now, I\'m really curious and would like to watch this movie. But, would really appreciate it if you can tell me more about this in class. And yes! I guess you are right. We expect to have more advanced AI in the future! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
I really expect to have a AI a house maid robot, a private driver robot and funny friend robot.
>>I really want to have an AI; a house maid robot, a private driver robot and a funny friend robot.
I like the movie \'A.I.\'
I like the movie \'A.I.\'
>>CORRECT
In the movie there was a little boy robot who was adopted to a normal human family intead of their sick human boy.
>>In the movie, there was a little boy robot who was adopted by a normal human family for their sick human boy. (I\'m not sure if I got this right, I haven\'t watched the movie..sorry ^ ^)
He was a happy and got love from human parents.
>>He was a happy robot and got so much love from his human parents.
But one day, the human boy recovered and came back home.
>>CORRECT
the boy robot tyried to get love his parents but his parents cared more their human boy and loved him more than the boy robot.
>>The parents immediately shifted their love and attention to their real son, the boy robot tried to get their attention and love back.
At the end, the robot boy sinked in the deep water waiting for his mother for a 1000 years.
>>At the end part, the robot boy sank in the deep water waiting for his mother for 1000 years.
and he was founded by aliens in the destryoed earth.
>>And he was found by aliens in the destroyed earth.
When he waked up, he asked aliens for his mother back to him.
>>When he woke up, he asked the aliens to bring his mother back to him.
Do you want to know more?
>>CORRECT
I will talk to you at the class.
>>I will tell you more about this in class.
Anyway, I want to have my robots in the future before I die.
Anyway, I want to have my robots in the future before I die.
>>CORRECT
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