homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Lily! ^^,)
It was our payday last Thursday so I was feeling ecstatic.^^
Thank you for doing your homework.
No matter how tiring your day is, always think of one or two good/happy experience/s that you\'ve had.
_T. Mayleen :)
Thursday was a pretty busy day with many things as well as taking classes.
>>> My Thursday was a pretty busy day because I did many things and took several classes.
After taking a total of three classes, I went to the bookstore which is in the university and bought the necessary textbooks.
>>> After taking a total of three classes, I went to the bookstore which is inside the university and bought the necessary/required textbooks.
After that, I met my friends and chatted happily for about an hour or two.
>>> CORRECT
Next, I came home by bus and had a delicious dinner.
>>> Lastly, I came home by bus and had a delicious/scrumptious dinner.
It was a tired but pleasant day.
>>> It was a tiring yet pleasant day.
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