Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Overseas trip is the best day in my life.
It\'s because when i went to the trip.
I can rest and do a lot of funny things.
And i can eat another country\'s delicious food.
I want to go overseas trip next year again.
강사 첨삭
Have a happy holiday [이름]! ^_^
Overseas trip is the best day in my life.
>> An overseas trip that I had is the best day of my life.
It\'s because when i went to the trip. I can rest and do a lot of funny things.
>> It\'s because when I went to this trip, I was able to take some rest and do a lot of funny things.
And i can eat another country\'s delicious food.
>> And I was able to eat another country\'s delicious food.
I want to go overseas trip next year again.
>> I want to go to an overseas trip next year again.
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