homework

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I hate a person who made a smartphone.

>>CORRECT!

>>I dislike the person who invented smartphones.

 It\'s another addictive things like a tabacco.

>> It\'s another addictive things like tobaccos.

 It\'s easy to find information in anywhere and anytime.

>>It\'s easy to find information anywhere and anytime.

 I don\'t have any intention to deny the advantage of smartphone.

>>I don\'t have any intention to deny the advantages of smartphone. 

 But, I just want to say that there is more disadvantage than advantage.

>> But, I just want to say that there are more disadvantages than the  advantages.

 People, especially children, can\'t stop using their smartphone even walking on the road.

>>People, especially children, can\'t stop using their smartphones even walking on the road.

 In my children\'s case, they don\'t want to sleep early and read books.

>>CORRECT!

>>From my children\'s experiences, they prefer not to read books and go to bed late.

 I gave up arguing with them.
>>CORRECT!

>>I\'m done arguing with them.

 Anyway, the strongest control system is needed to use smartphone.

>>Anyhow, the strongest control system is the use od smartphones.