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What makes Chuseok in Korea special ?
A lot of families meet together to hold their ancestral rites in Chuseok traditionally . They makes various foods such as galbee, namul, japche, songpeon, fish food, and so on. The songpeon is that we just make in Chuseok day. I will let you know how to make it. First, make a dough rice flour with hot water. And take a little bit of it, put the various beans, chestnuts, sesame mixed with sugar, etc. in it. And then, cook it with hot water.
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Hello Bella,
Happy Monday, I hope you had a great time with your previous holiday. Anyways, thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
What makes Chuseok in Korea special ?
A lot of families meet together to hold their ancestral rites in Chuseok traditionally.
A lot of families meet together to hold their ancestral rites in Chuseok traditionally.
>>>Traditionally, A lot of families meet together to hold their ancestral rites in Chuseok.
They makes various foods such as galbee, namul, japche, songpeon, fish food, and so on.
>>>They makes various dishes such as Galbee, Namul, Japche, Songpeon, fish dishes, and so on.
The songpeon is that we just make in Chuseok day.
>>>Songpeon is only made in Chuseok.
I will let you know how to make it. First, make a dough rice flour with hot water.
>>>I will teach you how to make it. First, combine rice flour with hot water for the dough.
And take a little bit of it, put the various beans, chestnuts, sesame mixed with sugar, etc. in it. And then, cook it with hot water.
>>>Then take a little amount of the dough, spread it to your palm and put the feeling: put the various beans, chestnuts, sesame mixed with sugar, etc. in it. Lastly, cook it to a pot with boiling water.
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