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2019-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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-If you could live anywhere else in the world, where would you live? Why?- (^-^) I want to live in New Zealand. I went New Zealand to study english for a month 5 years ago. That time I felt happy. There were not many cars, so the air was fresh. Also, there were many trees and grasses around. I can see a lot of cows along the road. There are many houses in the village, not apartments. The houses have a large yard. I think New Zealand is peaceful and happy country.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ellen! Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^

I could just imagine how wonderful you felt while in New Zealand even for a short period. I would also like to visit this country someday! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I want to live in New Zealand.

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I went New Zealand to study english for a month 5 years ago.

>>I stayed in New Zealand five years ago to study English.
That time I felt happy.

>>CORRECT
There were not many cars, so the air was fresh.

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Also, there were many trees and grasses around.

>>CORRECT
I can see a lot of cows along the road.

>>CORRECT
There are many houses in the village, not apartments.

>>CORRECT
The houses have a large yard.

>>The houses have large yards.
I think New Zealand is peaceful and happy country.

>>I think New Zealand is a peaceful and a happy country.

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