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Thank you Ms. [이름]!

I\'m always glad to read your composition which is terrific . :) I\'m always amazed by your thoughts and opinions. :)  In addition, I think mothers do scold their children about their performance assessment just to challenge them. However, for some parents they ask much that causes suicidal attempt and suicidal thoughts that might lead to execution.  :) Have a prosperous Tuesday! :)

~Teacher Lucy

This morning, I read a news article about adolescent suicide.

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>>I read a news article about adolescent suicide this morning.

 It looks like a global phenomenon.

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>>It seems to be a worldwide circumstance.

 Furthermore, the suicide age is getting younger and younger.

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>>Moreover, young suicide victims are in a large number.

 I\'ve heard that some elementary students commit suicides because of academic stress.

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>>Academic stress is one reason that elementary students commit suicide.

 It is a tragedy.

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>>It\'s a catastrophe.

World is becoming stranger.

>>World is becoming strange.

>>Bizarre things are happening in the world.

 I try not to scold my children because of academic result.

>> I try not to scold my children because of their academic results.

But I can\'t stop.

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>>Though, I sometimes can\'t control.

 Although, I know I shouldn\'t have scolded them.

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 It\'s just a excuse that it\'s for their future.

>>It\'s just an excuse for their future.

 The most important thing is the balance.

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>>Balancing is the most important one.

 If someone tells me they are thinking about suicide, I don\'t know how to do.

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>>I don\'t know what to do when someone is having suicidal thoughts.