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I think disasters help build communities because disaster makes people coorperate each other. This coorperation encourage people\'s unity. As a result, people are more willing to establish a community.
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I think disasters help build communities because disaster makes people coorperate each other.
>>> I think disasters help build communities because it makes people cooperate with one another.
This coorperation encourage people\'s unity.
>>> correct
As a result, people are more willing to establish a community.
>>> correct
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