homework
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HOMEWORK KEY ANSWERS: Can you talk about three things you can\'t do?
First, It is cooking because i can make simple recipe but I can\'t make difficult food.
I can make almost food to eating myself but it is to difficult to decorated food.
Second, I can\'t stayed in PC room long time, because if i stayed long time my head is very dizzy and lazy.
When i was young, I was been to go there many times, but nowadays I looked for another activity.
The last thing is playing game to using computer.
Almost people have a great skills in computer games, but my case, I just focused in one game called kart rider.
It\'s very funny game and It describe reality car driving.
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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
>>First, it is cooking because I can cook a simple dish but I can\'t cook difficult recipes..
I can make almost food to eating myself but it is to difficult to decorated food.
>>I can cook almost all the food that I can eat, but it is to difficult to decorate food.
Second, I can\'t stayed in PC room long time, because if i stayed long time my head is very dizzy and lazy.
>>Second, I can\'t stay in the PC room for a long time, because if I stayed for a long time I will be very dizzy and lazy.
When i was young, I was been to go there many times, but nowadays I looked for another activity.
>>When I was young, I went there many times, but nowadays I am looking for another activity.
The last thing is playing game to using computer.
>>The last thing is playing a game using a computer.
Almost people have a great skills in computer games, but my case, I just focused in one game called kart rider.
>>Almost all people have great skills in computer games, but in my case, I just focus in one game called kart rider.
It\'s very funny game and It describe reality car driving.
>>It\'s a very fun game and it describes the reality of driving a car.
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