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2019-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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I once bought a treatment to improve my hair. But it didn\'t work. Because I didn\'t wash my hair often. And I think it\'s good to buy cosmetics that fit me. Cosmetics seem to fail a lot in buying. Anyway, I hope you will buy cosmetics well. I think cosmetics are especially hard to buy.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [Name]^^

Yeah, I totally agree with you! Finding the best cosmetics for your skin type is quite difficult.

I only use four - my toner, moisturizer, essence and sunscreen. I think these are the basic things women have.

Thank you^^


I once bought a treatment to improve my hair. But it didn\'t work.
>>I once bought a treatment for my hair, but it didn\'t work.
Because I didn\'t wash my hair often.
>>CORRECT!
And I think it\'s good to buy cosmetics that fit me.
>>I think it\'s good to buy cosmetics that fits me.
Cosmetics seem to fail a lot in buying.
>>I seem to fail in choosing the best cosmetic for me.
Anyway, I hope you will buy cosmetics well.
>>Anyway, I hope you buy the best cosmetics that suits you.
 I think cosmetics are especially hard to buy.
>>I think it\'s hard to buy good cosmetics.

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