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2019-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

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I think my lower part in my life is when i moved my school in 4th grade. It\'s because moved school is very hard to me. I will meet new classmates and teacher. So it is very uncomfortable to me. But now i am come back to previous school. Now I can play with my old friends and in school\'s new friends.

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I think friends really are important, [이름]! :)


I think my lower part in my life is when i moved my school in 4th grade.

>> I think the lowest part of my life is when I moved to another school in 4th grade.


 It\'s because moved school is very hard to me.

>> It\'s because moving to another school is very hard to me.


 I will meet new classmates and teacher.

>>  I will have to meet new classmates and teachers.


 So it is very uncomfortable to me.

>>  So it is very uncomfortable for me.


 But now i am come back to previous school.

>>  But now, I am back to my previous school.


 Now I can play with my old friends and in school\'s new friends.

>>  Now I can play with my old friends, and my school friends.


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