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I think friends really are important, [이름]! :)
I think my lower part in my life is when i moved my school in 4th grade.
>> I think the lowest part of my life is when I moved to another school in 4th grade.
It\'s because moved school is very hard to me.
>> It\'s because moving to another school is very hard to me.
I will meet new classmates and teacher.
>> I will have to meet new classmates and teachers.
So it is very uncomfortable to me.
>> So it is very uncomfortable for me.
But now i am come back to previous school.
>> But now, I am back to my previous school.
Now I can play with my old friends and in school\'s new friends.
>> Now I can play with my old friends, and my school friends.
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