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~Teacher Lucy

My favorite function is searching a map where I can go to.

>>CORRECT!

>>Map application is my favorite function.

 Especially in the new place.

>>Especially in a new place.

 Of course, there are many useful things on smartphones.

>>CORRECT!

>>Undoubtedly, there are numerous features of smartphones.

 I can search the information, read articles and books and watch dramas.

>>CORRECT!

>>I can do various things such as, reading articles and books and watch dramas.

 It\'s a mobile computer on the hand.

>>It\'s a handy mobile like a computer.

But it\'s too tired to use with long time.

>>But it\'s too tiring to use for a long time.

 Eye power is getting worse and worse.

>>CORRECT!

>>My eyesight is becoming weaker.

 If I use my phones a lot before going to sleep, it causes sleeping problem.

>>CORRECT!

>>It causes sleeping problem when I use my phone a lot.

 I hate a person who invest a smartphone.

>>I hate a person who invest their into smartphones.

 It has pros and cons.

>>CORRECT!

>>It has good and bad side.

But I think that the smartphone has more disadvantage than advantage.

>>But I think that the smartphone has more disadvantages than advantages.