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2019-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Essay Question What are some good points and bad points about social networking? The good thing about social networking is that it is easy to get information and communicate with others. The disadvantages may be that personal information is easily exposed and time-consuming for information that is not needed.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for the time in doing this homework Cecelia! ^^

You are right. Social networking has also disadvantages that\'s why

I don\'t really expose myself on social media. However, the good points

of using this are some things that we can enjoy and are helpful ^^

~~Teacher May~~

The good thing about social networking is that it is easy to get information and communicate with others.

>> CORRECT
The disadvantages may be that personal information is easily exposed and time-consuming for information that is not needed.

>> The disadvantages are that personal information may be easily exposed and time-consuming when putting information that is not needed.

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