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Hi there, Eve!

This is a really good composition. ^^

I agree with what you said!

Keep it up.

~t. Ally

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I think the growing trend in downloading ready-made essays and other forms of homework from the Internet is the one of the greatest way to study.

>> I think the growing trend of downloading ready-made essays and other forms of homework from the Internet is one of the greatest ways to study.

Most people believe every person has various opinions and ideas.

>> CORRECT!

Also I agree of that sentence, so Internet is considered of the space that various people exchange their each opinions and ideas. 

>> I also agree with that sentence, so Internet is considered as the space where various people exchange each of their opinions and ideas.

But there are some careful points using downloading ready-made essays and other forms of homework from the Internet.

>> But there are some careful points in using and downloading ready-made essays and other forms of homework from the Internet.

 First of all, we should be careful about other users’ copyrights. I heard that Imitation is the mother of Creation.

>> CORRECT!

This sentence means when you do your work, you can practice from other person’s work.

>> This sentence means, when you do your work, you can practice from another person’s work.

If you do that you can learn other person’s technic.

>> If you do that, you can learn from another person’s technique.

And you should have your own opinions.

>> CORRECT!

There are many and various opinions in the Internet.

>> There are many and various opinions on the Internet.

If you don’t have your own opinion, you should become a irresolute person.

>> If you don’t have your own opinion, you should become an irresolute person.

I think the trend on the Internet is a good way to learn if only these things are careful.

>> I think the trend on the Internet is a good way to learn if only these things are handled carefully.