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2019-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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Alcoholic, now known as alcohol use disorder, is a conditiona in which a person has a desire or physical need to consume alcohole, even though it has negative impact on thier life. The National Institute on Alcohol Abuse and Alcoholism (NIAAA) describes alcohol use disorder as \"problem drinking that becomes severe.\".A person with this condition does not know when or how to stop drinking. They spend a lot of time thinking about alcohol, and they cannot control how much they consume, even if it is causing serious problems at home, work, and financially. Being alcoholic can lead to severe health problems such as high blood pressure, heart disease, stroke, liver disease and digestive problems.

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~Teacher Lucy

Alcoholic, now known as alcohol use disorder, is a condition in which a person has a desire or physical need to consume alcohol, even though it has negative impact on their life.

>>CORRECT!

The National Institute on Alcohol Abuse and Alcoholism (NIAAA) describes alcohol use disorder as \"problem drinking that becomes severe.

>>CORRECT!

\"A person with this condition does not know when or how to stop drinking.

>>CORRECT!

They spend a lot of time thinking about alcohol, and they cannot control how much they consume, even if it is causing serious problems at home, work, and financially.

>>CORRECT!

Being alcoholic can lead to severe health problems such as high blood pressure, heart disease, stroke, liver disease and digestive problems.

>>CORRECT!

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