homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
The difficulties are trust between sellers and buyers.
>>CORRECT!
>>The trust between sellers and buyers is difficult to establish.
For example, price, expiry date, condition and so on.
>>CORRECT!
>>The details like price, expiring date condition and so on.
I refer the review when I order groceries thorough online.
>>I refer to review when I order groceries through online.
It is useful when I don\'t have enough time to go to the supermarket.
>>CORRECT!
>>It\'s convenient for buyers who don\'t have time to go to the supermarket.
But I don\'t order fresh vegetables and fruits.
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>>Moreover, I don\'t order fresh vegetables and fruits.
Even if the conditions is good at first, there is a possibility to be destroyed while it is delivering.
>> Even if the conditions are good at first, there is a possibility to be destroyed while delivering.
I prefer to check the conditions of vegetables and fruits before I buy them.
>>CORRECT!
>>I prefer to check the vegetables and fruits thoroughly before I buy them .
Excluding them, it\'s okay to buy packed groceries.
>>CORRECT!
I need to trust sellers.
>>CORRECT!
>>I sometimes need to trust sellers.
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