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HOMEWORK KEY ANSWERS: Do you feel tense when you meet someone for the first time?
Mostly, I didn\'t feel like that however when i meet new person for my interview i feel little tense.
For example, when i met my boss I can\'t acting like my best friends.
Because he is my boss and he is not my friend, So that time i\'m doing polite and honestly.
The best example is my military experience, When i got a new level, Our unit captain gave us the medals.
Soldier came out the stage each by one, Proper tense look better in that situation.
No frozen, just doing naturally, It is best way to face someone.
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Because he is my boss and he is not my friend, So that time i\'m doing polite and honestly.
The best example is my military experience, When i got a new level, Our unit captain gave us the medals.
Soldier came out the stage each by one, Proper tense look better in that situation.
No frozen, just doing naturally, It is best way to face someone.
Mostly, I didn\'t feel like that however when i meet new person for my interview i feel little tense.
>>Mostly, I don\'t feel like that however when I meet a new person for my interview I feel little tense.
For example, when i met my boss I can\'t acting like my best friends.
>>For example, when I meet my boss I can\'t acting like he is my best friend.
Because he is my boss and he is not my friend, So that time i\'m doing polite and honestly.
>>Because he is my boss and he is not my friend, So that time I will be polite and honest.
The best example is my military experience, When i got a new level, Our unit captain gave us the medals.
>>The best example is my military experience, whenever I got a new level, our unit captain gave us the medals.
Soldier came out the stage each by one, Proper tense look better in that situation.
>>Soldiers will go to the stage one by one, beco[이름]g tense looks better in that situation.
No frozen, just doing naturally, It is best way to face someone.
>>Not frozen, but just doing it naturally, it is the best way to face someone.
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