homework
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HOMEWORK KEY ANSWERS: What are some reason why privacy is important for you?
Because privacy is not spread to everyone, also That information knew only myself.
For example, It can be your account number or password or private answer.
I think that privacy is important to me but not much, because If i have more privacy, also follow the huge risk.
It look like privacy and secret mean little difference. privacy can\'t be shared to everyone but secret can be shared if i\'m the best friend.
If privacy is not important to me, i can hacked my crucial number by someone.
It is important to protect your privacy, because Nobody can\'t help your privacy.
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>>Because privacy is not meant to spread for everyone, also that information should only be kept for myself.
For example, It can be your account number or password or private answer.
>>CORRECT
I think that privacy is important to me but not much, because If i have more privacy, also follow the huge risk.
>>I think that privacy is important to me but not much, because if I have more privacy, I also have to take a huge risk.
It look like privacy and secret mean little difference. privacy can\'t be shared to everyone but secret can be shared if i\'m the best friend.
>>Privacy and secrecy has a little difference. Privacy can\'t be shared to everyone but a secret can be shared if he or she is my best friend.
If privacy is not important to me, i can hacked my crucial number by someone.
>>If privacy is not important to me, my crucial number can be hacked by someone.
It is important to protect your privacy, because Nobody can\'t help your privacy.
>>It is important to protect your privacy, because nobody can\'t help you about your privacy.
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