Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK :
Do you always consider other people’s opinions before making decisions? Why or why not?
Yes. I always consider.
When I was talking with other people\'s, I respect that person\'s opinion.
I respect your opinion, because I must continue the conversation with you.
So I can continue interpersonal relationships with you.
Thank you for reading!
See you in class tomorrow~!^^
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Erin!^^
Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s a good practice for your writing and grammar skills. Keep it up!^^
Yes. I always consider.
>>> Yes. I always consider it.
When I was talking with other people\'s, I respect that person\'s opinion.
When I was talking with other people\'s, I respect that person\'s opinion.
>>>When I am talking to other people, I respect that person\'s opinion.
I respect your opinion, because I must continue the conversation with you.
I respect your opinion, because I must continue the conversation with you.
>>> I respect your opinion because I must continue the conversation with you.
So I can continue interpersonal relationships with you.
So I can continue interpersonal relationships with you.
>>>So that I can continue my interpersonal relationship with you.
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