Homework
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강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Lucy
I\'d like to work in Canada.
>>CORRECT!
>>I wish to work in Canada.
But I don\'t like winter.
>>CORRECT!
>>However, I don\'t like winter.
It\'s a dilemma :)
>>CORRECT!
>>It\'s my dilemma.
Thus, our couple is persuading my sons to study and work there.
>>Thus, my husband is persuading my sons to study and work there.
The problem is that they don\'t like cold weather, either...
>>CORRECT!
>>Both of them don\'t like cold weather.
I envy a person who is strong against a low temperature.
>>CORRECT!
>>I\'m envious to a person who has a high tolerance when it comes to low temperature.
If I go there, I will suffer from runny nose because of allergy.
>>CORRECT!
>>I might always catch a cold when I go there.
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