Homework
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Hello.
It is after a long interval and I upload a homework.
I think that on line class\'s merit is whenever I want to time when I can take a class.
But the on line class is student\'s attention\'s deficient more than the off line class
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I\'m glad you submitted homework. ^^
It\'s great to have you back!
~. Ally
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I think that on line class\'s merit is whenever I want to time when I can take a class.
>> I think that having the chance to take a class at the time I want is one of the merits of an online class.
But the on line class is student\'s attention\'s deficient more than the off line class.
>> But the online class\' student\'s attention becomes deficient more than in offline classes.
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