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The government gives pension though it\'s not enough. Nonetheless, if you have an investment for your future pension in a private sector, then well and good. But there\'s a catch, you need be partner with company that will stand for centuries. :)
~Teacher Lucy
I think pension system is more important than age.
>>CORRECT!
>>Pension system is more important than the age.
If the company or the government operate pension properly, it dosen\'t matter when people retire.
>>If the company or the government operates pension properly, it dosen\'t matter when people will retire.
I want to retire at any moment but I can\'t.
>>CORRECT!
>>I would love to retire anytime but I still can\'t.
I hope the retirement age becomes earlier.
>>I hope the retirement age becomes lower.
As time passes, my eye sight and my body conditions are getting worse and worse.
>>CORRECT!
>>As time passes by, I\'m having poor eye sight and worsening body condition.
I\'m afraid of aging.
>>CORRECT!
>>I\'m afraid of getting older.
It will be difficult to work as I get older.
>>CORRECT!
>>As I get older, it becomes harder.
If pension company worked well, I could retire.....
>>CORRECT!
>>I could retire any moment as long as the pension company works well.
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