homework
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강사 첨삭
Good evening, Lily! ^-^
Happy Tuesday!
Thank you for answering your homework.
You picked a good one. However, I like Chris Hemsworth (Thor) more than RDJ.
Both are excellent actors, right? :)
I will see you later in class.
_T. Mayleen :)
I really want to meet Robert Downey Jr.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I really want to meet Robert Downey Jr. in person.
The reason is that I am a big fan of iron man.
>>> The reason is that I am a big fan of Iron Man.
When I saw the iron man movie, I am fully attracted to RDJ\'s acting because he acted very well as iron man.
>>> When I saw the movie \'Iron Man\', I was fully attracted to his acting because he acted very well.
I think RDJ is perfect actor to iron man.
>>> I think RDJ is the perfect actor to play the role of Iron Man.
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