Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
There are various wedding celebration around the world. Some are bizarre, beautiful , terrific and so on. Thank you for sharing your opinion. :) Have a great day!
~Teacher Lucy
There was no marriage proposal in our time of marriage.
>>CORRECT!
>>There was no proposal in the old days.
I think I\'m proposing marriage these days.
>>I think marriage proposal is often these days.
An ideal marriage proposal would require a sincere heart.
>>CORRECT!
>>A sincere heart is a requisite in a marriage proposal.
In Korea, there is a traditional wedding in hanbok and a Western wedding in dress.
>>CORRECT!
>>In Korea\'s wedding celebration, there is a traditional wedding in hanbok and a Western wedding in dress.
And these days, many traditions are disappearing and many people are getting married in their own way.
>>CORRECT!
>>Nowadays, traditions are disappearing and people get married in their own way.
I think the wedding ceremony marks the first day a man and a woman make a family in front of many people.
>>CORRECT!
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