Homework
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Where would you like to work out in a gym with a lot of people or in your own home?
I prefer working out in a gym to doing it in my home. A lot of things in my home such as computer, TV, bed, and so on get to interferes with my excercise. As I watching TV, researching on computer, resting in bed, I\'ll end up nothing to do. That\'s why I have to go to gym , if I really want to work out.
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Hello Bella ,
Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Keep up the good work! Be always healthy. ^^
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
Where would you like to work out in a gym with a lot of people or in your own home?
I prefer working out in a gym to doing it in my home.
I prefer working out in a gym to doing it in my home.
>>>CORRECT
OR: I prefer working out in a gym to doing it at home.
A lot of things in my home such as computer, TV, bed, and so on get to interferes with my excercise.
>>>A lot of things at home will interfere my exercise such as computer, TV, bed and so on. There would be a lot of temptations if I do it at home.
As I watching TV, researching on computer, resting in bed, I\'ll end up nothing to do.
>>>If I watch TV, research on the computer and lay on my bed; then I\'ll end up doing nothing.
That\'s why I have to go to gym , if I really want to work out.
>>>That is why I prefer going to the gym and I need to do it if I really want to work out seriously.
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