Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework is as follows:
What is a healthy snack for children like you?
It\'s a nut bar and fruit shake.
강사 첨삭
Hello,
Thank you for answering this simple question. It would have been better if you explain why do you like this snack. Keep it up! Keep improving.
Teacher Annie
What is a healthy snack for children like you?
It\'s a nut bar and fruit shake.
It\'s a nut bar and fruit shake.
>>>For me, a nut bar and a fruit shake are healthy snacks.
They are made out of nuts and fruits which are healthy for our body.
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