Homework.
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When i went to the amusement park with my friend,
It had rained.
We were very upset and angry.
So my mom said we can see a movie.
We went to the movie theater and saw a movie.
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>> When i went to the amusement park with my friend, it rained.
We were very upset and angry.
>> Correct.
So my mom said we can see a movie.
>> Correct.
We went to the movie theater and saw a movie.
>> Correct.
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