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HOMEWORK KEY ANSWERS: Have you ever yelled at someone or been really angry because they didn\'t do something? What happened?
Yes i have about that experience, when i served in military we have a four different level of solider.
Normally, we have to do cleaning our room because one of executive checking the condition.
Also, we have a cleaning area each by one, however who is my company didn\'t do that.
because nobody didn\'t looking to him and command to him.
At first time, we decided to patient because he stayed in military just 2 months.
So, we thought that he wasn\'t adapted this place but he was lying in bed very naturally.
Finally, all of my company got angry and yelled to him very loudly.
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Normally, we have to do cleaning our room because one of executive checking the condition.
because nobody didn\'t looking to him and command to him.
At first time, we decided to patient because he stayed in military just 2 months.
So, we thought that he wasn\'t adapted this place but he was lying in bed very naturally.
Finally, all of my company got angry and yelled to him very loudly.
>>Finally, all of my comrades got angry and yelled at him very loudly.
Yes I have about that experience, when i served in military we have a four different level of solider.
>>Yes I have experienced that before, when I served in the military we have four different ranks.
>>Normally, we have to do clean our room because one of the executives is going to check the condition.
Also, we have a cleaning area each by one, however who is my company didn\'t do that.
>>Also, we have to clean an area, however those who are in my group didn\'t do that.
because nobody didn\'t looking to him and command to him.
>>Because nobody was looking for him and no one commanded him.
At first time, we decided to patient because he stayed in military just 2 months.
>>At my first time, we decided to be patient because we stayed in the military for just 2 months.
So, we thought that he wasn\'t adapted this place but he was lying in bed very naturally.
>>So, we thought that he hasn\'t adapted to this place yet, but he was just lying in bed.
Finally, all of my company got angry and yelled to him very loudly.
>>Finally, all of my comrades got angry and yelled at him very loudly.
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