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2019-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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HOMEWORK KEY ANSWERS: Do you think dress codes should be adhered to if requested on an invitation? It can be different where you going to destination. If i got a letter about my friend wedding, I have a duty to wearing a nice suit. because that is very crucial ceremony and normally only one time of your life. in the other sides, If i got a invitation by my friend just drinking of beer near my hometown. i don\'t need to suit and nice dress, i will be wearing just simple clothes. I think that dress codes can be changed where are you go or who do toy meet. Dress codes look like manners, \"Manner makes man\"

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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

It can be different where you going to destination.
>>It can be different depending on where are you going to.
OR
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>It can be different depending on where is your destination.

If i got a letter about my friend wedding, I have a duty to wearing a nice suit.
>>If I got a letter about my friend\'s wedding, I have a duty to wear a nice suit.

because that is very crucial ceremony and normally only one time of your life.
>>Because that is very important ceremony and normally, the only one time of your life.

in the other sides, If i got a invitation by my friend just drinking of beer near my hometown.
>>In the other sides, if I got an invitation from my friend, we just drank some beer near my hometown.

i don\'t need to suit and nice dress, i will be wearing just simple clothes.
>>I don\'t need to suit-up and dress nicely, I will wear simple clothes.

I think that dress codes can be changed where are you go or who do toy meet.
>>I think that dress codes can be changed depending where you go or who do you meet.

Dress codes look like manners, \"Manner makes man\"
>>Dress codes reflect our manners, \"Manner makes a man\"

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